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The Kiss

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The Kiss:

Together alone:
Just he and I.
His hand on my cheek,
His breath on my face.
Slowly, silently,
His face nears.
My eyes widen with shock,

Our lips meet:
A torrent of colors,
I’m floating, I’m sinking
I’m flying, I’m grounded.
My eyes close,
My hands on his.
Eternity passes,
My heart beats faster.

He pulls away:
I miss the warmth already.
His eyes search mine,
A smile on those…
…delicious lips.
His hands on my waist,
He draws me closer.
I lean into his embrace,
He smells so nice.

He whispers in my ear:
‘I love you.’
I smile.
‘I love you, too.’
Yeah. I'm amazed at how nice this came out. I was thinking about my first kiss, which was Steven, and this is what was created. I'm amazed because I'm not usually this "mushy" about romance and stuff. This was basically how I felt when we kissed.

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GameUniverso's avatar
You've given interesting context of meaning on the word "grounded".  That word seems to refer to a goal with distance, like destiny with attachment, and the lovers are locking horns without much arguement.  Nicely done!